farawayeyes4: (ChuckWriting)
In the last update, I started digging into learning what I need to learn in order to get my book published.

It seems to start with the query letter. Let me tell you, query letters scare the crap out of me. They're a one page distillation of an entire novel, and I have to be frank. I don't know how to write one. At. All. All my research had me spinning in circles, trying to figure out just what is the right advice and what is wrong.

So, I took the basics I learned from the various articles I read, and I'm starting with the opening of a query letter---or the hook.

Every source I looked up on writing a hook mentioned the backs of books and looking at how they sell you the book. That's basically what you're trying to do in order to get the agent/editor/publisher to even want to look at your book.

Lucky for me, I have a stack of back book covers to read over and study. I think that's the task to do this week and perhaps next in order to get the hook I want.

Even if it seem like a waste, it might do some good to practice writing a hook for a different book, too. Not as pressured to distill my whole book into a single sentence or two---and not as close to my heart then.

I'm thinking of perhaps doing a bit of both for the next couple weeks. I'll share whatever I think is the best in the next update---along with some of the hooks I find on the backs of books that I particularly liked.

I wanna get hooked! How about you? (I know. Groan away.) 
farawayeyes4: (ChuckWriting)

Last time I simply put out an ask for help. I want to know the publishing secret handshake so I can get my book out to the world. So today, I sat down and started the research process.

A follower on Twitter linked me to an article about how publishers go about choosing books for publication. It was a fascinating read, discussing the meeting that takes place between the various people in the publishing house. Marketing, editors, accountants, and more gather to discuss the profitability of various manuscripts on the table. I'm not surprised that the primary focus is on money and sales projections. Working retail as long as I have, that's about the only thing that seems to matter on many levels.

Which makes me think about my literary paranormal novel and it's chances. Since I don't know yet how to make the pitch to sell it to the big group at the publishing house or a literary agent, that brought me to my next step: researching the query letter.

It seems that everyone has their opinion on how a query letter should be written. I don't know how to do that, yet, so I am looking for any advice anyone is willing to give me on this subject. How do you start one? What does it entail? Where should I send it? To how many different agents and agencies should I query at a time? Are there any recommended books anyone can suggest that discuss this in a manner that doesn't just make my head explode?

The more I researched, the more my head started to swim and be overwhelmed. Some said not to start with a hook that jumps into describing the story itself. Others said it's a must. Some said to not give it all away in short synopsis paragraph. Others said you must include the ending or risk being passed on.

Which is right? It would seem that I have a lot more digging to do today and through the week if I'm going to nail down the next piece in the puzzle.

Meanwhile, I'm also debating starting that long overdue fifth draft. I am proud of the current form of my book, don't get me wrong, but I worry that I haven't done enough to make my manuscript as polished as it could be. What needs to be rewritten, cut, or added? What needs better description or dilaogue? I'm a bit lost on that, too.

All in all, this first day trying to figure out what to do now with the publishing goal in mind is a lot of “I don't know what I'm doing. Help!”

So again, I ask for everyone's help and guidance. I do know one thing about publishing---or the world in general. You can't get anything done without asking for help sometimes.

Until next week!

farawayeyes4: (La Mer)
After the warm reception for chapter I, I thought I'd post II. I am uncertain and wary about posting the whole thing, BUT I am curious to see what your thoughts are on the second chapter. Enjoy. Share you thoughts.

Chapter II )
farawayeyes4: (La Mer)
I am being brave and posting this chapter here to get a bit of opinion on my little novel. It's the first, so no one will be lost. Depending how this little experiment goes I might post another as we go along. I need feedback, and I figure this is a safe place to get it as any. Be honest, tell me what works, doesn't work, needs clarification, what you liked, what you didn't, whatever.

Thanks so much for looking.


Chapter 1 )

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